I do poems for fun, sometimes i run out of ideas. As you can see i will be posting poems here and i would like your comments on how i should improve. Writing poems is one of my hobby's. Hope all of you enjoy my poems hope to get responds and comments.
Monday, October 6, 2014
we lost
We lost
We killed it
It all exploded
And slowly pained
It all came
We saw beauty
Fall and die
In the night
We both begged
For more
And more
You let the blood
Stain on the shirt
We both love
We both put a stain
Stain of sorrow and pain
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